Interesting... most of your stanzas used 'initial repetition' (like I.... and You...) but your final stanza was a nice break from all that...The middle two lines "Long gone / I was" refers to the past, the surrounding outer lines "Long-lived... I am" refer to today. Very unique way to end, I suppose...The overall feeling (surprise) is one of love and heartbreak. Thanks for sharing!
Sooo beautiful as always, Steph.Big in emotions and less in words. I like that.
Thank you, Lux! :)
I hope you make a video for YouTube... I love art in general, and you (in particular) are inspirational!
Aww, thank you! I will be turning this poem into a video for my YouTube channel, it should be done soon. I will let you know when it's finished! :)